Various Ramblings on a September Night

As I understand it, tonight is the official Harvest Moon — the full moon closest to the equinox and the beginning of fall. It will be in the sky all night, from around sunset to around sunrise, doing everything a full moon should do. I saw it earlier, white and round and bright.

I’m going to throw pictures from two different occasions at you — maybe three — interspersed with various thoughts I’ve been writing down and saving up. So this post will be somewhat like what would happen if you visited me on an autumn night, and we pulled our chairs up to the fire.

Bridgewater BookFest, Bridgewater, PA, September  14, 2013. Nearly 40 authors gathered in the huge Authors' Tent, signing books and spending a happy day hanging out with a book-loving public. Many thanks to the organizers and all who took part or stopped by!

Bridgewater BookFest, Bridgewater, PA, September 14, 2013. Nearly 40 authors gathered in the huge Authors’ Tent, signing books and spending a happy day hanging out with a book-loving public. Many thanks to the organizers and all who were there!

Entirely new subject — I warned you this was going to be all over the place! — this week, one of my creative writing students, a high-schooler, wrote:

“Imagination is the noise of race cars in an empty room.”

Isn’t that great?

Niagara Falls, September 8, 2013. My first time to go there. Really impressive! We stopped there on our way back from a wedding in Rochester, New York.

Niagara Falls, September 8, 2013. My first time to go there. Really impressive! We stopped there on our way back from a wedding in Rochester, New York.

This is absolutely true: I met a person recently who lives on Windy Ghoul Lane. That’s an honest-to-goodness street name in this area: Windy Ghoul Lane. Wouldn’t you love to have that address? I would! I only saw it written; I didn’t hear it pronounced. I don’t know if it’s windy as in “the wind that blows” or windy as in “twisty, a winding lane.” In either case, it’s a road with “ghoul” in its name. It’s a Hallowe’en address, and people get to live there year-’round! (This joins the ranks of fantastic western Pennsylvania road and street names, which include Elfinwild Road and Oberon Drive. Out here, people don’t waste the opportunity to name a street something good. I never knew it was possible to have so much civic fun, having grown up among streets named after trees and Presidents and the occasional Native American people.)

The gargoyles go to Bridgewater BookFest. They were quite a hit with the crowds!

The gargoyles go to Bridgewater BookFest. They were quite a hit with the crowds!

I observed something interesting about second languages this week. Julie and I both have a second language that we used for many years, to the point that we dreamed in them and often thought in them. Occasionally even now, the Japanese word for a thing or a situation or a social relationship will pop into my head and out of my mouth before the English. I finally noticed a pattern of when it’s most likely to happen. It’s when I’m focused on something, such as doing work on my computer, and I speak in response to something outside my area of concentration. For example, I was working on student papers the other day, and Julie was nearby, and I sneezed. Immediately and unconsciously, I said, “Shitsurei,” the Japanese equivalent of “Excuse me” in that context. At another time on another day, I was similarly concentrating, and Julie thanked me for something, and I said, “Iie!” (“Not at all!”). We conferred about this phenomenon, and Julie agrees that that’s the way her Russian and Ukrainian seem to emerge, too. There’s something about that buffering — that distance of having to respond when you’re not fully present, mentally — that tends to throw the switch of the secondary language. Interesting!

Niagara Falls

Niagara Falls

I read an intriguing article today. It claimed that the #1 thing that draws readers to a fiction writer’s web site is when the writer offers exclusive short fiction there related to his/her own published work — for instance, spinoff stories . . . prequels . . . stories about minor characters in a novel who become, in the short pieces, the main characters, with stories of their own. The author might write a follow-up to a book s/he has out there — what became of the characters twenty years later? Or something set earlier: how did the villain become the villain? Or what happened to the characters between Books 2 and 3 of the series?

Giving away candy definitely helped to attract people, too. And so did those wonderful illustrations by Emily Fiegenschuh for "The Star Shard" in CRICKET! And that's the earliest I've ever carved a jack-o'-lantern.

Giving away candy definitely helped to attract people, too. And so did those wonderful illustrations by Emily Fiegenschuh for “The Star Shard” in CRICKET! And that’s the earliest I’ve ever carved a jack-o’-lantern.

So let’s take an informal poll here. I’d love to hear comments from you, Friends of the Blog. If I were going to try writing a spinoff story for exclusive publication here on my web site (I’d be sure to notify you through the blog), what would you most like to see? [I’m not promising anything yet — just speaking hypothetically here, as we warm our feet and the logs settle with a flurry of sparks in our imaginary fire.]

 

Atop the American Falls at Niagara.

Atop the American Falls at Niagara.

Think it over. There are almost endless possibilities. A story about Cawdor as a young werewolf . . . a tale of how Wiltwain came to join up with Master Rombol . . . an account of the job Conlin did just before the one that brought him to that little Illinois town that’s not on any map . . . We’re just talking here, but what would you like to see if I were to attempt something like this?

This is a model I built of the balloon-ship APOLLYON for THE FIRES OF THE DEEP. I had fun that summer, building models to put off the actual hard work of writing. Heh! This was the second one I made -- to scale, according to how the ship is described in the book. I went to a craft store, bought balsa wood, measured it, etc. Since most of the book takes place aboard, I wanted to know, for example, what a character standing on the war deck could see. Could s/he see the bow? You get the idea. I started this one in Illinois and finished it in Niigata.

This is a model I built of the balloon-ship APOLLYON for THE FIRES OF THE DEEP. I had fun that summer, building models to put off the actual hard work of writing. Heh! This was the second one I made — to scale, according to how the ship is described in the book. I went to a craft store, bought balsa wood, measured it, etc. Since most of the book takes place aboard, I wanted to know, for example, what a character standing on the war deck could see. Could s/he see the bow? You get the idea. I started this one in Illinois and finished it in Niigata.

So, at Niagara Falls, we also walked across the bridge into Canada and saw the falls from that side. The view is better from there; but on the American side, you can get very close and personal with the falls on a walking tour called “Cave of the Winds.” (Disclaimer signs announce that there is no actual cave.) You are provided with a raincoat, because you can walk right up to where the falls is falling on you:

The Hurricane Deck at the American Falls.

The Hurricane Deck at the American Falls.

On the Hurricane Deck, a spindly wooden contraption built on the lap of the American Falls, the spray blasts over you. You venture forward, water pummeling your chest, your shoulders, your head. All around you is whiteness. You can only open one eye at a time, and then only briefly. But you’re in the parlor of an immemorial Presence, so you press all the way into the corner of the platform, close enough to thrust your arms into the forge where thunder is folded and hammered out. You tip your face upward, not caring how much water is sluicing down your collar, and you look straight into its white eyes, this mighty Thing that was equally roaring centuries and centuries ago. The fury is breaking around you; the Falls knows your shape, and you know its vastness.

The Hurricane Deck

The Hurricane Deck

Quite a place, Niagara Falls.

The American Falls

The American Falls

There must be gold at Niagara Falls, because rainbows end right there. You can see where they end. The Maid of the Mist churns right through their feet!

Horseshoe Falls, Canada

Horseshoe Falls, Canada

Boat pilots there know their stuff.

Horseshoe Falls, and God's bow

Horseshoe Falls, and God’s bow

 

Horseshoe Falls (the Canadian side)

Horseshoe Falls (the Canadian side)

"I do set My bow in the heavens . . ."

“I do set My bow in the heavens . . .”

Penultimate photo of this post:

Bridgewater BookFest, 9/14/2013

Bridgewater BookFest, 9/14/2013

And finally, one of the very best photos from our wedding day, taken by the amazing Marti Aiken:

We were only crossing the tracks to get back from a location, not having a session there. It poured rain in the brief interval between the wedding and the reception, when we were scrambling around taking pictures. This is one of our favorites.

We were only crossing the tracks to get back from a location, not having a session there. It poured rain in the brief interval between the wedding and the reception, when we were scrambling around taking pictures. This is one of our favorites.

Happy Harvest Moon to all!

 

 

 

19 Responses to Various Ramblings on a September Night

  1. Rich S. says:

    Extremely fun post to read. You don’t usually do hodgepodge, so a pleasant surprise to see your mind jump from topic to topic.

    • fsdthreshold says:

      Thank you, Rich! It was fun to write in this style — yes: hodgepodge! That’s the word for it!

      I’ll make this comment hodgepodge, too:

      1. True story: in the gift shops at Niagara Falls, I kept seeing that name printed on shirts, mugs, postcards, etc., and thinking every single time: “They misspelled Niigata.”

      2. Happy Anniversary to Mr. & Mrs. Marquee Movies! Many blessings to them!

      3. Hold good thoughts for us. We’re attempting to camp out tonight . . . in predicted thunderstorms . . . before heading, bedraggled, to the Highland Games tomorrow. (We received a tent and sleeping bags as shower/wedding presents! So, naturally, we can’t wait to try them out!)

  2. Marquee Movies says:

    Thank you for your kind words! And that’s funny that you kept thinking they misspelled Niigata! Windy Ghoul Lane is SO COOL! (I think it HAS to be Windy as in the wind blows….) Maybe you can do what you and your friends did as a kid, and go up and down your street, petitioning the neighbors to change your street name. If you could name the street where you live, what would you change it to? I’d have to think about this – we’d probably go with something Irish. We’ve nicknamed our condo complex Killarney Pond, after the county in Ireland where we got engaged. As for bonus stories, that sounds like a great way to build (and reward) your fan base. I also think it’d be a lot of fun – after all, didn’t Tolkien write The Hobbit as a way of explaining one detail of Lord of the Rings? (Or do I have that backwards?) Frequently, television shows are canceled that, while not having great ratings, have a rabid fan following, and it always amazes me that the creators of the show don’t find a great author, and commission a novel that wraps up all the loose ends that the abrupt cancellation left dangling. I mean, don’t those storytellers have stories inside of them waiting to get out? These were great photos, every one of them. Have fun, and stay dry, and BE SAFE camping tonight! Thanks for the hodgepodge post – this was a lovely way to commemorate the harvest moon, pulling up to your fire like this!

    • fsdthreshold says:

      Thanks, Marquee Movies, for this thought-provoking comment — lots in there to think about!

      Camping was lots of fun, and the rain held off! Thanks!

  3. Heather Styer says:

    1. your model

    I always wished someone would do a series of models of Biblical cities etc. It makes a lot of sense that you would be interested in the character’s physical point of view. What an imagination you have!

    2. your wedding photo

    I have a wedding photo in the center of my album that I have hated for years. I let the photographer pick it out so we could get home from hours of choosing photos. Since seeing your photo I am now seeing beauty in mine.

    • fsdthreshold says:

      Heather, thanks for your comments!
      1. the model — I really appreciate your kind words! Biblical city models would be fascinating. Yes, it was fun creating those ship models for my book, and then using them as I wrote scenes. I think it gives the story a layer of realism that it might not otherwise have. And the more your world is real to you, the writer, the more realistically you can portray it. I’ve also had good experiences writing stories with maps and with visual portraits of the characters in front of me.

      2. the wedding photo — That’s wonderful to hear about how you’re looking at one of your wedding photos in a new light! Even without having seen it, I’m almost positive there’s a lot of beauty in it, and I’ll bet the photographer chose it for a good reason.

      The reason I like this one of ours so much is because of all the elements that tell the viewer something about the day and our lives. First and foremost, Julie looks really feminine and beautiful in it. That would be reason enough for me to love the picture. But I also like how well the umbrella is centered behind her — how it’s so clearly raining a deluge, but she’s dry — so it looks like I’m doing a good job of taking care of her. The setting is interesting, with the rain, the tracks, and the colors in the concrete. Finally, you can tell how hard Scott (in the background) is working to take care of us, toting the climbing stool and the bouquet. He’s soaked to the skin, but he’s getting the job done — that aspect of service also helps make it a striking photo. It’s one of those that, even if you didn’t know any of us, you might appreciate it simply as an artistic and very human picture. And it helps us remember the details of that day.

      Again, thanks for reading the blog and sharing your thoughts!

  4. Daylily says:

    I would love to read the story of how the Urrmsh came to work on the Rake. Or some story of the Urrmsh people, including one of their songs. A story about Cymbril’s parents would be interesting, too.

    • fsdthreshold says:

      Thanks, Daylily! Those are good ideas! It is fun to think about how the Urrmsh came to work aboard the Rake. It is certainly tied in with the story of how the Rake came to be!

      It would also be quite an intriguing challenge to translate a song of the Urrmsh into English. It would be something like an oratorio, because speed is not a high priority with the Armfolk. Meaning and completeness of information would come only with the accumulation of many layers — their music would be something like weaving, with many threads being drones and background. For example, if a character in one of their songs made a sea voyage, there would be an awful lot of the song devoted to expressing things about the sea. There would be onomatopoeic representations of waves and winds. The Urrmsh would view the sea to be an essential part of the song; the voyage couldn’t be understood without the sea over which it was made.

      And yes, it would be fun to write about Cymbril’s parents.

      Thanks for answering the “poll”!

      • Daylily says:

        Now I would love to hear the music of the Urrmsh! It would have a sense of timelessness and confidence and peace, I think. The way of life of the Urrmsh is the opposite of the frenetic style of many American lives, and the music would be part of that different, unhurried way of life.

        • fsdthreshold says:

          Good observations! Yes, I agree. It would be a peaceful sound to hear, but it would also not sound like any “music” we’re used to hearing. The book notes that Cymbril can’t tell whether the Urrmsh are telling a story or singing a song — she can’t distinguish between the two forms. Both sound like the purring of gigantic cats and the folding of waves on a seashore. It would all be sibilant and liquid and bubbling — perhaps like certain kinds of snoring — but quite pleasant. I think Cymbril can listen to it for a long time because it’s white noise to her. It both soothes her and helps her to think her own thoughts. Certainly the book suggests that the main narrative of the songs and stories moves from one of the Armfolk to the next. It’s tossed around like a ball in a friendly game, and the others presumably provide drones, counterpoints, and underpinnings. I would guess that there are principles of Urrmsh music that make sense to the Urrmsh — they can tell their songs and their stories apart!

  5. Scott says:

    I loved the pictures.

    We visited Niagara Falls last November on our way to upstate New York. We couldn’t go on the boat or the Hurricane deck because everything was closed for the winter. We also couldn’t go to the Canadian side because we didn’t have passports with us.

    As for stories, Mothkin must have some amazing stories of his own. You could probably fill a book with them.

    • fsdthreshold says:

      Thanks, Scott! We didn’t go on the boat, either. I would certainly recommend summer and the Hurricane Deck for the real, raw Niagara Falls experience, if you don’t mind getting wet. They also provide flip-flops that you get to keep — but there’s no locker for your shoes. I kept mine wrapped in a plastic bag and held against me under my raincoat, and they stayed perfectly dry, but my jeans were wet to the hips, and my shirt was drenched, especially the sleeves. But of course, that’s because I stood right in the most violent corner of the deck and looked up into the Falls . . . twice. Most people stayed a little drier.

      And yes, definitely take a passport and go over into Canada. You can see the view a lot better and more completely from over there.

      Mothkin . . . you’re right! There could be a whole series of books of the things he’s done! Thanks for the “vote”!

  6. Morwenna says:

    What a gem of a wedding photo!

    About the online story, I’d love to read a tale that somehow takes us to Weepwallow again.

    Marquee, Happy Anniversary! Irish blessings!

    • fsdthreshold says:

      Thank you, Morwenna! Yes, Weepwallow . . . I have a fondness for it, too.

      There is actually a whole apocryphal adventure already written that does take place mostly in Weepwallow. It’s about ten chapters, if I remember right, that begin right where The Star Shard leaves off and take the characters through another adventure. When I was trying to make a novel out of the Cricket story, I intended that to be how the novel continued and ended, but editors were (rightly) telling me that it was like a second book tacked onto the end of the first one. Hmm . . .

  7. Marquee Movies says:

    Thank you, Morwenna!
    “You’ll never be the sun
    Shining in the sky
    You’ll never be the moon above us
    On the moonlit night
    And you won’t be the stars in heaven
    Although they burn so bright
    But even on the deepest ocean,
    You will be the light.”
    (From one of my favorite Irish songs!)

  8. Mrs. Spamman says:

    So what online story would I like to read? When I came to the end of The Star Shard, I didn’t want it to end. I wished there would be another book. There were so many questions I had. Of course I wanted to know what happened with Cymbril and Loric. But I also wanted to know about Urrt. Did he go back to the Rake? How long did he stay? What did he do? And what of the Rake? How would life there be different now? And what of Rombol and his business? Without Cymbril’s singing to attract customers, what would happen? Would Rombol find some other form of entertainment to attract business? But I’m not sure I really want to know. Sometimes I think the sign of a great book is to be left wanting more. You have enjoyed your time with the characters so much that you don’t want to part. But part you must. So if the story were to be related to The Star Shard, I think it would need to be a prequel or a story of how the characters came to be where and who they are. Maybe it could be a story of the early days of the Rake. Whatever it would be, I’m sure we would all enjoy it immensely.

    Also, the wedding photo is beautiful!

    • fsdthreshold says:

      Thank you for these thoughts, Mrs. Spamman. I really appreciate what you wrote about The Star Shard (and the wedding photo!). Your point is well taken about how it’s good to be left wanting a little more and pondering unanswered questions. I obviously wove threads into the book that would become important in later books in the series, and some readers have asked about those hints. Who is the mysterious “benefactor”? Who is Brigit, and why does she know Cymbril? I suppose these issues might be explored in a prequel as well as in sequels. It’s all worth thinking about. Thanks!

  9. Holly J. Beard says:

    Love the pics and the post. Your bride is gorgeous and seems a perfect fit for you. And as far as elaborating on your stories here – I’m all for it. I love anything you write.

    I apologize for the tardiness of this response, but I’m just getting around to reading your older blogs. Cheers!

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