Schools, Parks, and May in the Uncanny City

You’ll appreciate this: today at work, I got hit by a flying lazy Susan. Yes, a wooden disc came bounding toward me, and I didn’t really see it until it had bounced off me onto the floor. Fortunately, lazy Susans have no corners or sharp edges — I wasn’t hurt a bit. I rescued it, and I even stood on it for awhile. My backup man “T” hadn’t seen the incident, and he was quite startled by my sudden ability to rotate in place without moving my feet (he couldn’t see my feet from where he was standing) — I think he was considering calling an exorcist. At the end of the shift, I left it leaning against the cardboard shaft, on the floor. Maybe someone on the second or third shift will fancy it and take it home.

Frick Park, May 4, 2013

Frick Park, May 4, 2013

Okay — there’s what it looks like when I write with the Neo in Frick Park! That’s me actually working on the book!

My "office" in Frick Park, Pittsburgh

My “office” in Frick Park, Pittsburgh

(That’s an abandoned dog leash on the ground, not a snake.)

Frick Park

Frick Park

I’m getting ever closer to the end of the draft: the book is now at 129,430 words. The latest sentence I wrote was “I blinked.”

Writing place in Frick Park

Writing place in Frick Park

That’s Julie’s purse, not mine . . .

May 4, 2013

May 4, 2013

Grrooiinnkkk! [The sound of changing the subject with a monkey wrench]

Some exciting news is that a couple weeks ago, I was in Wisconsin for the baptism of my new goddaughter! I’ll withhold her full name to protect her family’s privacy, but her first name is Elizabeth. It was an honor and a great blessing to be there, and a very special privilege to have this responsibility! It was wonderful to spend time with a college friend and his family. Here’s a picture of me there, at the softball game of my friend’s oldest daughter:

 

Me, looking like a movie director

Me, looking like a movie director

When I told my boss I was heading for Wisconsin, he insisted that I had to try something called “cheese curds.” I was agreeable; I’m always most ready to eat cheese. I wondered how “curds” were different from straightforward “cheese” that we all know about. Was it a folkloric thing, I wondered, like curds & whey? Would it be like eating cottage cheese with my fingers? The mystery only deepened when I got to Wisconsin and my friend (“Preacher” on this blog) advised me that cheese curds would be squeaky . . . they’d squeak against my teeth. “How can cheese be squeaky?” I asked him. He told me I’d understand soon.

So on the way to that double-header softball game, we stopped at a cheese dairy and acquired a big bag of curds. They really do squeak! Now I understand indeed. And they are amazing! Throughout the weekend, I kept suggesting that we get them out of the refrigerator and eat more of them. My hosts would ask me at various times if I was hungry, and I’d say, “Well, maybe we could get out the cheese curds?” I would have brought some back with me, but the ones for sale in the airport were labeled “Keep Refrigerated,” so alas, they must remain a good object of pilgrimages to fabled Wisconsin.

Okay, here’s a picture of me and little Elizabeth:

 

Central Wisconsin, April 2013

Central Wisconsin, April 2013

And here’s something for which I’m also tremendously grateful! My friend (Elizabeth’s father) arranged for me to do some writing workshops at schools while I was there!

Second-grade poetry writing workshop

Second-grade poetry writing workshop

For one thing, I got to work with second-graders on writing poetry. This workshop was a whole lot of fun. Poetry is perhaps the easiest form of creative writing to teach, especially to younger children. We have to learn vocabulary and mechanics as we get older, but kids are natural born poets. From the time we leave the womb, we enjoy rhythms, repetitions, and playing with sounds. We use our senses; we soak the world in. In this seminar, we made a list of spring colors and of things we see, hear, smell, and feel in the springtime. We talked about rhyme schemes and beats in a line. Then we worked as a class to write a spring poem (which was quite good! — I wish I’d saved a copy!). Finally, each student followed some instructions to compose a poem of his/her own. And wow! — there are some amazing young writers in that class!

Fourth- and fifth-grade creative writing workshops

Fourth- and fifth-grade creative writing workshops

In the fourth and fifth grades, students identified and focused on some principles of good writing. Then they set about improving a story that needed some help. Again, I was impressed with how well they did! I could tell they have dedicated teachers at their school.

The artwork of Emily Fiegenschuh for "The Star Shard" in CRICKET Magazine

The artwork of Emily Fiegenschuh for “The Star Shard” in CRICKET Magazine

I showcased the illustrations Emily Fiegenschuh did for “The Star Shard” in Cricket, and we talked about the collaborative process between a writer and illustrator. I hope the workshop encouraged the artists in the group as well as the writers.

High-school novel-writing workshop

High-school novel-writing workshop

I also had the great fun of speaking to a high-school class about the process of novel-writing. I drove the points home that, if you want to change the world even a little for the better, one of the best things you can do is to write clearly and well; and that if you have the dream to leave books and stories behind you in this world, it’s an attainable goal. There’s nothing superhuman about published writers. They’re simply people who don’t give up — who keep writing. They’re people who finish things. They’re people who love the excitement of making something real and vivid and lasting on pages that started out blank.

Yes, it was a good time in Wisconsin. I’m thankful to have been there when the wheel went ’round.

 

 

 

20 Responses to Schools, Parks, and May in the Uncanny City

  1. Julie says:

    “People who don’t give up…people who finish things.” I think I’m going to need these lines repeated to me periodically over the next few years.

    Was nice seeing those teaching pictures again! 🙂

    • fsdthreshold says:

      Thanks, Julie! I think we should just repeat those lines back and forth to each other over the next few years. 🙂

  2. Preacher says:

    Fred, it was such a blast having you visit us! And the second grade teacher had the kids look at your website on their SmartBoard. They will LOVE being shown in your blog. (I am a bit disappointed here though–no mention of the wonders of cheese curds??) The principal of the school told me the teachers were pretty impressed with your work. They really liked how you got the kids writing. I’ll start working on a plan for next year!

    • fsdthreshold says:

      Preacher, you’re right! I knew I’d forgotten something crucial! I have revised the blog entry to include the wonders of cheese curds. Sorry for the omission, and thanks for pointing it out! And thanks for introducing me to them!

      I’m thrilled and delighted that the school was happy with the workshops! I would love to visit there again! Thank you so much for all your help, for making it possible!

      And it was wonderful to meet your family and spend time with you all!

  3. Marquee Movies says:

    Oh, man, cheese curds. The baptism is nice, the opening of children’s minds to poetry and writing is nice, but boy oh boy, cheese curds. I’ve recently discovered them myself. Pretty much every gas station (every Gas ‘n’ Zip, every Pump ‘n’ Munch) in Wisconsin sells bags of them in their refrigerated section, close to the beer and the deer sausage. A friend, Liz Meinzen, recommended them to me. I had been seeing them for years, but never tried them. Like you, Fred, I thought, I’ve had cheese before – I like cheese – what’s so special about these? 275 bags later, I now know. Often the bags had instructions on how to deep fry them – I never tried this, as the refrigerated versions seemed perfect to me. Looking forward to my next trip to Wisconsin for just this purpose! Someone should coin some advertising slogan, “The squeaky cheese gets the job done,” or something like that. I like cheese curds – don’t know if I mentioned that.

    • Gabe Dybing says:

      Yes, deep frying cheese curds is the way to go! I’m here in Minnesota, just across the River from Wisconsin, and cheese curds have been a staple. I’m something of a connoisseur, but I almost never eat cold, refrigerated cheese curds. They’re not bad, but their not the breaded melty salty goodness of the cheese curds that are served in nearly every bar and diner in the Southeast corner of Minnesota.

      The best cheese curds I ever had were in the Chat n Chew in Lanesboro, Minnesota. I know they’re the best because, if a new place I’m eating offers cheese curds, I have to try them. None of them have quite stacked up.

      • Marquee Movies says:

        LOVE the name, Chat n Chew. Near River Forest, there used to be a bar called “He’s Not Here,” which is, presumably, how they’d answer the phone. Concordia students loved hanging out at the Come Back Inn. I love clever restaurant/bar/pub/gas station names. And by the way, I really want to try some deep fried cheese curds now, but I probably shouldn’t. You know….addictive.

  4. Joe M says:

    I’m back! I had the oppertunity to meet Michel Sauret. He taught me a little about self publishing. He is really helping, between the two of you showing me the ropes, I think i will become a superb writer. I am 2 short stories away from having enough for a compilation ready.

  5. Joe M says:

    And, I almost forgot, congratgulations on the engadgement. I would have said something earlier, but I am super busy, after all I just kicked my writing into high gear, to get done faster. Met an Editor named Kyra walker. I was going to pay her to look over my work and edit it before I submit it to an agent.

    • fsdthreshold says:

      Hi, Joe! Very good to see you back! And I’m really happy that you’re working so hard on your writing! Please keep me posted on your progress!

  6. Joe M says:

    Will do. I turn 18 later this month, so I am going to be fairly busy. But I will keep you posted. CICADA still hasn’t gotten back to me on the poems. I sent a follow-up. He responded and said the editors are still reviewing it. I guess sometimes no news can be good news…..

  7. “Fools”, said I, “You do not know
    Silence like a cancer grows
    Hear my words that I might teach you
    Take my arms that I might reach you”
    But my words, like silent raindrops fell
    And echoed
    In the wells of silence …

    • fsdthreshold says:

      I am applauding you, dear friend, for most elaborate complaint — great effort! 🙂 And I hear you. My lateness in getting a new post up has been weighing on my mind as well! Thank you for being there to watch, wait, and nudge.

  8. jhagman says:

    I was worried Fred had been mugged in that park, and then turned masked avenger, a writer/vigilante wearing tights, his nights fighting crime!

  9. We never did learn what happened to those ducks in the alley in Japan, did we? Maybe Fred pulled a Napolean “Animal House” trick, took them away, and specially trained them as his own Fred Fowls, agents of vengeance!

  10. fsdthreshold says:

    He walks the back alleys of the Uncanny City . . . a crunching steel-toed footstep, the sound of a push broom, a shadow on the wall. What manner of man is that climbing that ladder, racing across that catwalk? Wherever citizens are in distress, he is there, shaking off ground glass at malefactors, hurling ruffians down shafts . . . He is . . . HARDHAT.

      • fsdthreshold says:

        Ha, ha! 🙂 His superpowers: able to stand in one spot for long periods of time; uncanny sorting skill; throwing accuracy; specially rated to climb ladders while encumbered with tools; impervious to clouds of stench; empathetic/telepathic communication with rats . . .

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